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TGH mini-arc 1: Page 1-2

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God, I swear I was twiddling my thumbs without motivation for the past 6 months about picking up my pencil again. Of course, after going to visit the Landmark Forum (forum which helps people achive selfawareness and helps them realize their dreams) in London, which my dear sister recommended it to me =), I'm finally back in the game, high as ever. Beside, since we didn't have PC in the place where I was staying with her at the time, I atleast had something productive to do. XP

In any case, after my last post of the cover page for 1st chapter, I figured I've left :icondarkspeeds: and other people waiting for quite long enough. So, without further adue, I present you the 1st 2 pages of the project that's been stuck in my nuddle for a very long time. ^^



What's going on here? For some reason, Ruby's being held in the cluches of a mysterious Mereman, so dangerous and wanted person, that they've sent TRAP's Overlord Duke Vienna and his fleet to take care of him, and yet Ashworth can do nothing, but watch as the two power-houses do battle on the scale at which he can't even begin to compete with. But yes, how in the world did Ruby and her friends got themsleves in this situation???
The following chapter and the continuing part of mini-arc will explain the events that the fortune hunters from Grand Get Guild got mixed into.


Chapter 1 Cover: [link]
Page 3-4: Comming Soon


For testing I decided to tryout some of the photoshop effects and try some new stuff to make it look more tasty to the peeps. :eye::eye: Lol, 1st time I tried to make rain effect. XP What do you guys think?

The Grand Ashworth series (C) :icondarkspeeds:
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SoftKeychains's avatar
You requested me to give a feedback, so, ready for it? :)
Sorry for earlier, I was busy, but now let me to see it better.
I will say the good and not so good points of this comic. I'm not any expert on them, but may help you to improve in the next pages:

Good points:
- The comic is easy to read and follow and we can see cleary what's going on. Nice!
- Simple but accurative lineart and characters' design.
- Weapon design, whoa!

Not so good points:
- I didn't like the big change of Ruby's expression from the second to first last panel. Is too sudden, from neutral to scared expression. Once again, is only my opinion through.


Is all. Hope that helped!
Ah, is not needed to notice me, I receive all your drawings since I'm watching you!